http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/poetic-asides/poetry-prompts/2011-november-pad-chapbook-challenge-day-4
Beneath my disappointment
Discouragement, regret
Beneath a selfish mountain
Of thoughtless words I’ve said
Beneath a shrine of failure
Excuses weak; slipshod
I found a thing of splendor
I found the grace of God
Janet~
I love how you ended it with hope!
ReplyDeleteThese were thoughts I had this morning and then I saw the prompt...it all seemed to fit.
ReplyDeleteGod bless, how cool to find peace in the end of struggles.
ReplyDeletesmiles.
love your poetry talent,
ReplyDeleteinvite you to share a free verse with us today.
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/11/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html
Hope to see you share, expose your talent to wider audiences.
:)