When you kiss me like that
Oh, but kiss me like that
I feel the chill dissipate
When you hold me like that
Oh but hold me like that
I forget everything that I hate
Tempted and tried,
I will no longer fight you
My total undoing is infinite bliss
I came in here just to tease and to spite you
But you trumped my plan with your upside-down kiss...
J~
Magpie tales
Adorable. Quite different from any that I've yet come across.
ReplyDeleteThank-you Dave.
ReplyDeleteIf I write using a prompt I never allow myself to peek at any other poems until I have written or attempted, just in case I get deterred or distracted.
love it! awesome!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
smiles...what a beautiful love..the repeated lines feel like a sigh adding depth to this...it made me smile big...
ReplyDeleteTruly a wonderful ending, Janet.
ReplyDeleteTopsy-turvy ~~ I love this!
ReplyDeleteI love the last line. :)
ReplyDeleteI like that upside-down kiss!
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A lovely piece!
ReplyDeleteBest laid plans, eh? ♥
ReplyDeleteThank-you to each of you...yes Cad, well laid plans....but you know what they say; a well-laid plan is but half the accomplishment:)
ReplyDeleteI, too, never peek at others before I craft my own. That said...I love your last line. Well done!
ReplyDeleteVery convincing poem.
ReplyDeleteUpside? Downside? Kisses are great from any direction!
ReplyDeleteDelightful, but I find upside down kisses a bit awkward. Makes me dribble.
ReplyDeleteJinksy, yes they are!
ReplyDelete...and Keith, well, the unplanned ones are still the best;-)
great ending
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