http://magpietales.blogspot.com/They come from everywhere
or anywhere
To rest
upon its shabby, unbiased form
Waiting for the train
or life
Or simply to escape
a sudden thunder-storm
A humble, red shoulder
of compassion
In a world of
concrete indifference
Janet~
I especially like the last line...wonderful...
ReplyDeleteThank-you, Tess
ReplyDeleteI almost took it in the same direction. Love the title.
ReplyDeleteThank-you Laurie. I like your see-saw poem, but did not realize it also included the wordle challenge. I love how, in the end motherly understanding and grace over-ruled frustration...
ReplyDeleteAn interesting interpretation of the picture.
ReplyDeleteImaginative, meaningful -- and well expressed.
ReplyDeleteDr. FTSE and Berowne, Thank-you for your visit and your thoughts.
ReplyDeletePowerful words here Janet...truly beautiful and that last line is amazing!!! :-)
ReplyDeleteA humble, red shoulder
ReplyDeleteof compassion
In a world of
concrete indifference
I do like your point of view...
Thank-you Carrie and Trellissimo
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ReplyDeleteThat's a wonderful description of most of the world's attitude these days. ♥
a humble red shoulder of compassion ina world of concrete indifference...may be the best line of a magpie i read today...great description...
ReplyDeleteJinksy and Brian,
ReplyDeleteThank-you both so very much.
comforting. I like the imagery of the red shoulder to lean on.
ReplyDeleteHi, Thank-you JG, for your kind words.
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