Life is poetry waiting to be written
Clever, Janet. I like having the contraries in the sensory details. One thing I have enjoyed about this exercise is that each person has had a slightly different take.
thank-you Margo. i liked this challenge even though I am not quite satisfied with the out-come, it gives me an awareness as I write of those opposing senses!
Thank you for your visit to this porch. I'd love to hear if or how this post/poem touched you!