Monday, October 24, 2016

If You Were I and I Were You...

 This was yesterday...
She thought it was a perfect coolish-autumn day to tromp through  the woods
and he thought it was a perfect coolish-autumn day to turn up the heat and have a big sleep.

If you were I
And I were you
Then when we two
Would get together

I suppose

…on second thought
We still would not
Understand each other
Any better

© Janet Martin


  1. Replies
    1. oh well...on both counts, art and poem:)

      I did not begrudge him is nap though...he is often working while we are getting our z-z-z's!He just got home in the morning, up long before the rest of the world! So I tromped and he snored;-)

    2. Still sad, though...
      Glad you have your creativity to vent just a little bit, in a nice cartoonish way :)


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