Friday, March 9, 2012

Lunar Torment

Tonight I allow you to take me
For I can no longer resist
Desire out-weighs common senses
Wrap me in your ocean of mist

Tonight I need more than a promise
Whispered through my window-pane
Tomorrow gleams on the horizon
Oh, let not this night pass in vain

Tonight you spread over my being
Translucent; you taunt, I beseech
But all I can hear is you breathing
In oceans that I cannot reach


I had all the lights turned out.
I was going to bed...
and then I looked out through my bedroom window at the sky!
I ignored the clock and went outside...heaven like this waits for no one
and morning can steal it away! 


  1. You are such an incurable romantic, Janet! I love it :-)

  2. Thank you for the inspiration!

  3. I love the romance of your poem
    The allure and attraction
    So beautiful

  4. Brad, Your poem is beautiful!

    HA, yes, I am...isn't it a grand way to live?

    Ella, I have read your poem at least four times! You waited to write 'the moon' until she gifted you the perfect words!

  5. Stunning! "oceans I cannot reach" really struck me.

  6. VERY beautiful! I especially love the last two lines!

  7. Kat and Sherry, thank-you so much!

  8. Yes the last two lines are magnificent and really give this great poem an ending to remember.


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