Poetic Bloomings invites us to attempt a Rondeau to day.
A rondeau (plural
rondeaux) is a form of French poetry with 15 lines written on two
rhymes. It makes use of refrains, repeated according to a certain
stylized pattern. It was customarily regarded as a challenge to arrange
for these refrains to contribute to the meaning of the poem in as
succinct and poignant a manner as possible. The rondeau consists of
thirteen lines of eight syllables, plus two refrains (which are half
lines, four syllables each).
The landscape sleeps; its umber sigh
Flows to the border of the sky
It stirs the mind to reminisce
And revel in a memory’s kiss
Where precious moments lie
The tears that fell from autumn’s eye
Lines curbs and ditches; we descry
The postlude of October’s bliss
The landscape sleeps
We cannot gather days gone by
See; even now soft moments fly
To line a vast phantom abyss
For soon the past is what now is
A sweet and winsome lullaby
The landscape sleeps
© Janet Martin
This is amazing. I must ask Ina to come over here, too, because I normally don't read this kind of poetry. Only this touches me. Thank you.
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thank-you Andrea. Your words are deeply appreciated:)
ReplyDeleteThis is so peaceful and gentle. Just lovely.
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful writing, Janet!
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