‘Too lyrical’, said one
Another one replied,
‘To rhyme, meter must be precise’
‘Too short, too long’,
They cried
‘Not impressed’, said he
‘Winner’ a voice declared
‘Punctuation needs some work’
The kind critic
Declared
‘Predictable’, one wrote
‘Superb’, another gushed
‘Ho-hum’, some yawned
While others found
A painting soft,
Word-brushed
Expounded do’s and don’ts
Rouse poet-smiles a bit
They know ‘tis futile to dissuade
The pen by
Rhetoric
© Janet Martin
I appreciate critiquing even when it leaves me scratching my head in confusion;-)