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Sunday, December 4, 2011

New Year's Eve Party...for Two;)


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Vanilla-scented moments, smooth as silk
Melt on Time’s subtle trivet
Dripping over its crusted precipice
Without an inkling of thought
Mission completed
Fodder for genuflection
Air laden with desire
Amorous fantasies
Morphing reality...

...Somewhere a dog barks
As December becomes January
Unnoticed

J~
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10 comments:

  1. MarianneDecember 4, 2011 at 6:36 PM

    And just like that, it seems you have written another lovely poem using those same tricky wordle words! This one is a beauty! Vanilla lends itself perfectly to candles! "Time’s subtle trivet" and "Dripping over its crusted precipice" are wonderful images. I especially loved your last lines: "Somewhere a dog barks As December becomes January Unnoticed."

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  2. Janet MartinDecember 4, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    Thank-you~

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  3. Beyond HorizonDecember 5, 2011 at 10:10 AM

    A perfect moment, what shall I say more
    :)

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  4. Janet MartinDecember 5, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Yes;))

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  5. Other MaryDecember 5, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    Oh Janet, this is great. That barking dog captures the melancholy of December becoming January so well.

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  6. nanDecember 5, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    Lovely. The ending is superb!

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  7. Traci BDecember 5, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    Two poems, two completely different types of love explored in your themes - two successes. Well wordled! :)

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  8. Mike PatrickDecember 5, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    Lightning strikes twice.

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  9. Janet MartinDecember 5, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    Mary, Nan, Traci, Thank-you so much.

    Mike...more like 'my muse was feeling kindly generous:)'

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  10. ChristineDecember 6, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    love that second line, perfect wordle

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