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Leftover sunshine quivers
Like soft strains of a violin
Subliminal master-piece hovers
On night’s mellow hastening
Upon earth’s ruddy fulcrum
The untidy moments of day
In a rustle of smug defiance
Shudder; before spinning away
I turn, in this rush of blue quiet
Tonight I am willing to prove
Darling, I am not gullible
But oh, I am in love
J~
Janet, thx for visiting my blog. I must say, BRAVA for working this wordle. I looked over the words and simply gave up! (Never afraid to admit my limitations...)
ReplyDeleteI love the phrase, "Upon earth's ruddy fulcrum." Really creative use of what I thought was an impossibly complicated group of words. Nice! Amy
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Amy,
ReplyDeleteTo someone who's writing leaves me speechless!!... I say sincerely,
Thank-you.
You've written a truly beautiful love poem using this week's very difficult set of words. "In this rush of blue quiet" is a gorgeous image.
ReplyDeleteMarianne, Thank-you so much for your visit and kind words. They are challenging this week. Tonight I hope to be able to see what images and words others drew from this set.
ReplyDeleteJanet this is really beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love what you did with the wordle words. :-)
Very nice, Janet. Creating a love poem from some tough words. Thanks for the comment on my blog:)
ReplyDeletePamela
Love always trumps untidy moments. Lovely, Janet.
ReplyDeleteThank-you Mike, I notice poetry in your corner. Does this mean the novel is written?
ReplyDeletelovely poem and good for you for putting each word on a line, not so easy to master
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