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Thursday, November 3, 2011

Good-bye


It’s sort of like the cold blue wind
Moaning outside my door
It’s sort of like the ocean waves
Sweeping an empty shore
It’s sort of like a bit of dirt
Bothering my eye
It’s sort of like a great big hurt
Telling you good-bye


J~


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2 comments:

  1. Mike PatrickNovember 4, 2011 at 12:52 AM

    I'm thrilled to see you writing to more and more prompts. Nothing but good can come of this. I hope you get that chapbook.

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  2. Janet MartinNovember 4, 2011 at 6:07 AM

    Thank-you Mike. I'm doing this even though I have no idea how to link in at the other end, and I simply have not had the time to figure it out, but I am hearing the same frustration from a few others.

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I hope you enjoyed your pause on this porch and thank-you for your visit!