tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post6877610616455287276..comments2024-03-22T07:52:09.997-04:00Comments on Another Porch ...A Poetry Blog: Thread of HopeJanet Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-92207793683973487652011-09-21T12:34:18.618-04:002011-09-21T12:34:18.618-04:00Thank-you so much. It is wonderful to 'meet...Thank-you so much. It is wonderful to 'meet' so many beautiful poets through this medium!Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-18446189420496332762011-09-21T12:22:29.141-04:002011-09-21T12:22:29.141-04:00You did wonderfully well with the words!
while th...You did wonderfully well with the words!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/09/while-instrument-plays.html" rel="nofollow">while the instrument plays</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-65811381433459889212011-09-21T10:21:43.456-04:002011-09-21T10:21:43.456-04:00So much sorrow, pain and regret in these lines, bu...So much sorrow, pain and regret in these lines, but a hopeful ending. Well done; great use of the wordle.Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-65102574939285859342011-09-19T08:18:31.611-04:002011-09-19T08:18:31.611-04:00Thank-you Richard,
That is exactly what those shee...Thank-you Richard,<br />That is exactly what those sheep were intended to portray. I appreciate your visit and your words.Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-23542810612387281542011-09-19T07:49:28.080-04:002011-09-19T07:49:28.080-04:00Janet, wonderful from beginning to end. I love tha...Janet, wonderful from beginning to end. I love that image of the ideals huddled "on opal-tinted hills / as flocks of paper-mache sheep" - such a great image of the ideals of youth as seen through the lens of experience.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-86235481003568996562011-09-18T16:39:15.382-04:002011-09-18T16:39:15.382-04:00Mike,
Sometimes moments and thoughts climax and th...Mike,<br />Sometimes moments and thoughts climax and the result is raw, unedited poetry.:) Thank-you sincerely.Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-56059472361073142792011-09-18T16:22:41.102-04:002011-09-18T16:22:41.102-04:00Brenda, I so love this truth...'Sometimes we h...Brenda, I so love this truth...'Sometimes we hold onto selfishness with indignance...the letting go liberates.' Wise words. Thank-you for your encouragement. It is a little frightening and daunting to mingle with the eloquent masses, but it is also tremendously encouraging!<br /><br />Thank-you Deborah.<br /><br />Mary, Do I hear the voice of experience?:)Your words are so true but not necessarily easy!<br />thank-you!<br /><br />Susannah, Thank-you so much.<br /><br />Yes, Daydreamertoo. It is important to forgive before the hurt turns to deep-rooted resentment.<br />Thank-you for your words.<br /><br />Megan, thank-you so much for your kind words...and on another note... Did you sleep last night? just wondering:)) Now I want to read your post. As soon as I sat to the computer my daughter told me she needed it for home-work.Si I went outside to enjoy the glorious afternoon!Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-2437604650667199952011-09-18T16:09:34.803-04:002011-09-18T16:09:34.803-04:00At last, you post your poet's heart. I've ...At last, you post your poet's heart. I've been waiting. So well done.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-84230876727112128732011-09-18T11:01:58.597-04:002011-09-18T11:01:58.597-04:00Janet, this is beautiful. Sometimes we hold onto s...Janet, this is beautiful. Sometimes we hold onto selfishness with indignance...the letting go liberates. Your initial stanza is so intense, and the last two soften your reader. Well done. Thank you for joining us at the whirl.<br />~Brendabrenda whttp://undercaws.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-88278783599987343552011-09-18T10:38:52.465-04:002011-09-18T10:38:52.465-04:00Oooh I felt this, wonderfully written!Oooh I felt this, wonderfully written!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-64748666148110008052011-09-18T09:43:20.929-04:002011-09-18T09:43:20.929-04:00The words "I'm sorry " can sometime...The words "I'm sorry " can sometimes lead to a new beginning and may overcome the silence. Nicely wordled!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-13801573929937003922011-09-18T08:36:08.963-04:002011-09-18T08:36:08.963-04:00Ooh I really, really loved -
"The verve of yo...Ooh I really, really loved -<br />"The verve of youth’s passion<br />has slipped down a corridor<br />through which I no longer seem to fit"<br />Very nice writing!Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-70299553915268282662011-09-18T08:33:54.320-04:002011-09-18T08:33:54.320-04:00Awww.... Never too late to say 'Sorry' but...Awww.... Never too late to say 'Sorry' but sometimes the hurt grows too deep to want to get beyond if it happens too many times.<br />Wonderful, emotional prose. Great wordle!Daydreamertoonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-81531927791547856292011-09-18T08:28:00.182-04:002011-09-18T08:28:00.182-04:00You did a great job with your challenge words :) ...You did a great job with your challenge words :) It's fun to create when we make it in to some sort of game isn't it? Have a great day!Lilac & Lavenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18310795393642483522noreply@blogger.com