tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post2868838186497952635..comments2024-03-22T07:52:09.997-04:00Comments on Another Porch ...A Poetry Blog: Time's Swift Ride...a SonnetJanet Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-44575457545443108732012-06-21T14:48:56.788-04:002012-06-21T14:48:56.788-04:00Dana,
Thank-you.
You are such an encourager and i...Dana,<br />Thank-you.<br /><br />You are such an encourager and it is deeply appreciated.Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-64828527438962825732012-06-21T14:42:21.438-04:002012-06-21T14:42:21.438-04:00i love where you went with this, and i think writi...i love where you went with this, and i think writing it in the form of a sonnet was an excellent choice. i especially like the part about "thought beckons me to ride / An invitation I cannot resist" and the image of the phantom stallion.<br /><br />you're a very pensive writer, Janet, i'm glad i found your blog. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416300760517862018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-43619094694363725772012-06-20T23:09:00.170-04:002012-06-20T23:09:00.170-04:00Thank-you for your thoughts, Mary.
Also I enjoyed ...Thank-you for your thoughts, Mary.<br />Also I enjoyed your poem! Much to think upon.Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-19383430491863767632012-06-20T19:00:26.026-04:002012-06-20T19:00:26.026-04:00Yes, when one is young, the rush is sweet....but n...Yes, when one is young, the rush is sweet....but now, one wants to slow down time a bit. And yes, life IS small beneath Time's little sky.<br /><br />(If you find time, I wonder what you think about my last poem -- written for Real Toads.)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com