tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post6343639878713143210..comments2024-03-22T07:52:09.997-04:00Comments on Another Porch ...A Poetry Blog: Blue...Janet Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-42974389778964233422012-07-01T22:36:27.369-04:002012-07-01T22:36:27.369-04:00Can't wait to read those of yours that I have ...Can't wait to read those of yours that I have missed! Life has taken an unexpected turn for a few days:)Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-6217323066632521452012-06-30T22:40:40.639-04:002012-06-30T22:40:40.639-04:00Bluetiful! I love it...it needs to be a song :D
...Bluetiful! I love it...it needs to be a song :D<br /><br />"To drain from my longing<br />The sound of your laugh<br />Is like pouring the ocean<br />Into a glass"<br /><br />Wonderful!!!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-26640115776603518912012-06-30T09:41:54.701-04:002012-06-30T09:41:54.701-04:00This is lovely, feels like a song with chorus. I l...This is lovely, feels like a song with chorus. I like the thought of drinking the ocean.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-1336022934787297562012-06-30T02:17:57.551-04:002012-06-30T02:17:57.551-04:00I too like the ocean in a glass stanza, but this o...I too like the ocean in a glass stanza, but this one did it for me: <br />Moments compile<br />Like they don’t even care<br />That history expands<br />Twixt my ‘here’ and your ‘there’vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-69182705304091267452012-06-29T16:26:19.109-04:002012-06-29T16:26:19.109-04:00To drain from my longing
The sound of your laugh
I...To drain from my longing<br />The sound of your laugh<br />Is like pouring the ocean<br />Into a glass<br /><br /><br />I just LOVE this visual!! Great writing my friend!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-75242409316138419802012-06-29T14:38:09.928-04:002012-06-29T14:38:09.928-04:00This was very much like singing the blues. Nothing...This was very much like singing the blues. Nothing hurts more than losing in love.<br />Very nice piece of lyrical prose.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-89043210808225673442012-06-29T13:21:42.786-04:002012-06-29T13:21:42.786-04:00... 'twixt my ‘here’ and your ‘there’ ~ magic...... 'twixt my ‘here’ and your ‘there’ ~ magical line in a lovely poem. I feel the BLUE!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-82642077590838972532012-06-29T12:28:49.238-04:002012-06-29T12:28:49.238-04:00I don't know the answer. But I enjoyed reading...I don't know the answer. But I enjoyed reading your take on Marian's prompt.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-66213171146957119852012-06-29T11:49:43.920-04:002012-06-29T11:49:43.920-04:00You have written such a moving piece...blue strike...You have written such a moving piece...blue strikes us all and sometimes we can't live outside the color...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-69655362903487534322012-06-29T10:42:34.216-04:002012-06-29T10:42:34.216-04:00Oh how we all become familiar with the color blue....Oh how we all become familiar with the color blue.......sigh. You have written Blue well:)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-46374584944739325212012-06-29T08:14:21.583-04:002012-06-29T08:14:21.583-04:00These words read as the lyrics to a song - all you...These words read as the lyrics to a song - all you need is the singer! Beautiful evocation of the word "blue".<br />I was struck particularly by the same stanza that Susan has copied in her comment - lovely impossibility suggested there.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-49520349936386883562012-06-29T07:36:01.242-04:002012-06-29T07:36:01.242-04:00very nice! my poem for this prompt has a similar m...very nice! my poem for this prompt has a similar meter and rhyme. i wonder why??Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-89880474434486694172012-06-29T01:08:07.865-04:002012-06-29T01:08:07.865-04:00"To drain from my longing
The sound of your l..."To drain from my longing<br />The sound of your laugh<br />Is like pouring the ocean<br />Into a glass"<br /><br />Loved this image especially in your lovely song. The refrain really works!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-8292894145849758152012-06-29T00:53:06.521-04:002012-06-29T00:53:06.521-04:00Thank-you Anthony:)Thank-you Anthony:)Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-66806326222984771822012-06-29T00:13:51.841-04:002012-06-29T00:13:51.841-04:00Enjoyed... Fits so many tunes.Enjoyed... Fits so many tunes.Anthony Ducehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17476865809734682418noreply@blogger.com