tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post4912277979704917374..comments2024-03-22T07:52:09.997-04:00Comments on Another Porch ...A Poetry Blog: A Minnesang... EmaciationJanet Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-58462748785199684302012-10-04T08:39:55.406-04:002012-10-04T08:39:55.406-04:00Wow...you make this form look so easy. I love wher...Wow...you make this form look so easy. I love where you've taken us and your close:<br /><br />"Until you have stripped me; your mission complete<br />I cannot hide; my emaciated form<br />Stands exposed; naked limbs reach to embrace sorrow’s storm"<br /><br />So emotive.<br /><br />The collage of the tree above is so apropos....all these seasons we experience. <br /><br />I enjoyed this very much, Janet.<br /><br />I apologize for being so distant...I've been trying to balance life a little bit. <br /><br />Warm smiles to you my friend and God's blessings always!<br />Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-85593325774954666432012-10-03T20:08:40.587-04:002012-10-03T20:08:40.587-04:00Yuriy, thank-you for feeling it, although I intend...Yuriy, thank-you for feeling it, although I intended no sorrow, such is poetry:) <br /><br /> This one, of all the poems I wrote today poured from the pen of a fool:)in full emotion.Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504381264366497570.post-16922221464566312162012-10-03T19:02:45.938-04:002012-10-03T19:02:45.938-04:00Yuriy: I wonder what was that, Janet... It is so p...<i>Yuriy:</i> I wonder what was that, Janet... It is so profound and hidden inside the stem of yours.<br />It is when <i>'which'</i> wishes to be <i>'who'</i>. I've shed a load of the saddest emotions with these tormenting lines and even lost to follow <i>"the instructions"</i> above about unrequited love that added only confusion to my shock. It was near to trance state... Speechless. <i>Am I so sensitive?</i>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com