Thursday, December 15, 2011

Off the Cuff


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When I look deep, deep
Past the blue and the green
Of your gaze
I feel myself being
Drawn in
To a sudden and intense blaze
And quite willingly I release
My resistance to this quantum bliss
As I fall
And I fall
And I fall
Into the warmth of
Your kiss…

J~

11 comments:

  1. Nice transition from gazing to kissing - very romantic!

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  2. ...I have no explanation but pure off the cuff writing:)

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  3. Now I want to go and get me a kiss. This had me in a daze. Nice.

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  4. Even i have a weakness for blue green eyes. Beautiful read.

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  5. This feels impromptu yet polished, great writing!

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  6. Both picture and words are sensual, seductive, drawing me in.

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  7. This is a very nice poem. It is very hypnotic, but full of love.
    Erick Flores

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